Activity 1: Write a Draft

Using Specific, Descriptive Language

Either tell a story that shows how you were transformed by specific experiences – or use a variety of specific examples that demonstrate the person you are. Focus on what they don’t already know – especially the stories and images which best demonstrate your character.

Revision Is Everything

As you reread your work, make sure to:

  • omit all vague words
  • read your work aloud, adding in punctuation and transitions when needed, and combining or dividing sentences when they sound awkward
  • ask other adults to read your draft and make suggestions
  • ask a teacher to read your final draft 
  • avoid saying anything obvious (e.g. “My name is John Doe and I’m writing this letter with hopes of being accepted at The University of Arizona”).


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Upload your draft to your portfolio.

  • Draft a personal statement. Don’t worry about the length for your first draft.
  • After getting feedback from other readers, revise your statement.
  • When revising, follow the length limit set by the UA: No more than 500 words.

Congratulations on completing Module 9! 
Now let's go on to Module 10